Chapter 1
“What
are you doing up there?”
She
startled by a slightly deep voice underneath her and the blonde haired girl had
to carefully balance herself while
looking down at the source of the voice.
A boy
with messy brunette hair and dirty face and clothes (did he just survive from a
mass sand storm?) looking up at her, hands on his hips, waiting for an answer.
From up
here she could tell that the boy is quite tall. Thin but still has muscles here
and there. And his eyes showed curiousty.
Curiousty.
She
then realized that she hadn’t answered the boy’s question yet.
She
moved her gaze back to the view in front of her. Enjoyed seeing the sun starting
to back to it’s place behind those mountains miles away. Admired the shade of
orange and pink and slightly blue sky.
“Nothing
that concern you.” She finally answered. She closed her eyes when the starting
to get cold wind hit her face smoothly. Her blonde hair waved a little. She
didn’t mean to be rude. But the words split just like that. And she was a bit
too careless to apologize to the stranger right now. It’s
not that he will be offended anyway, she
thought.
The
said boy from under the tree frowned. Didn’t technically expect a longer and
nicer answer from her but the hint of tiredness in her voice got him even more
curious and worried, a bit.
“Are
you gonna wait until the sun disappeared? If so, I’ll be right down here when
you finished.” He shouted at the girl. Finally let himself sit under the tree
and tried to make himself comfortable. He could sense the girl above him glared
at him.
“What
do you want?” Her voice filled with annoyance. What is this guy up to? She
didn’t need another stubborn person (she was pretty sure that this boy is not
gonna be an easy case) to deal with. Today was tiring enough for her. And she
just wanted to end it and be an anti-social for the rest of the night.
“It
seems like you need someone to talk to. And I’m too kind to not care about it.”
He said while slowly closing his eyes, arms crossed on his chest, and inhaled
deeply. Exhaled slowly. It was really starting to get cold.
The
girl scoffed, “No, I don’t need your generousty. I’m done talking with people.
Go away.”. Now she wasn’t that interested to watch th sun goes down anymore.
The boy down there disturbed her time and all she wanted to do is to make him
leave her alone.
The
brunette boy hummed, still with eyes closed, “But you look like you need to
spill everything off of your chest. And as a generous person like you said, I’m
willing myself to listen to your worries.”
The
girl let out a tiny scowl, “It’s not worries. And how could you see it. Your
eyes are closed.”
“Oh,
damn!” The boy groaned, and opened his eyes. “You’re right. How should I
supposed to know if you didn’t tell me. Gee, you're saving my life.Thanks.” He sassed, and looked up
to her. “Now I see you. And I know behind that sorrow and tired face of yours,
you’re about to explode.” He stated in a matter-of-factly act.
The
blonde girl rolled her eyes, 'What an smartass', she thought, didn’t understand herself for keeping up with this
annoying stranger. She should’ve just ignored him. But she didn’t. She realized
the she kind of needed that attention right now. People usually don’t even
bother to ask her what’s happening, let alone sparing a glance. So a stranger
came to her and talked like he knows everything about her was something new.
But he was still annoying no matter what.
"Just leave. Don't waste your time talking to me." She said softly, watching the brunette haired boy under the tree still didn't budge from his position. Made the girl sighed, giving up to make him leave and throw her gaze back to the sunset and the scenery underneath. They were far from crowds but she could see the road was filled with transportations. Traffic jam, a sight you would always find after-work hour. She could hear the sound of cars honking repeatedly, getting impatient due to tiredness and headache of the drivers. Pedestrians on the sidewalk fastened their pace to reach home earlier before the sky getting darker. Some couples walked slowly, enjoying their moment in the dusk and cold weather. Some guys walked in a suspicious way, and she didn't want to know what they want to do. It's not like she didn't know though. They were pretty obvious, but people were just too stupid to realize it.
"Do you like coffee?"
The girl glanced lazily at the brunette boy down there. It should be a peaceful moment for her. But a strange annoying boy just decided to show up from nowhere and disturb her only peaceful moment of the day.
"I like coffee. We should get some coffee sometime. What do you think?" He continued and glanced up at her, grinning widely, waiting in anticipation. Why is he so cheerful? Nothing is cheerful about this talk, she thought, still with her bored look. And the she scoffed.
"Why do you think I wanna meet you after this?" She smiled mockingly, little did hope that would annoy the boy. But the latter just grinned wider, this time looks happier, and that was much to her dislike.
"What?"
The brunette shrugged, "You smiled. That's a progress." He said, smiling at her.
The blonde's eyebrow twitched, clearly annoyed. "I'm not smiling." He retorted, shaking her head.
The boy chuckled in amusement, "Sure you didn't."
The girl glared at him, 'He's mocking at me.' she thought angrily.
"Bastard", she muttered to herself.
Realized
that it started getting really dark, and the street lamp not far from their place
has been turned on, the girl glanced back to the sunset.
It
disappeared, she missed the chance to see the sunset fully disappeared. And that was upsetting.
The sky now was dark orange and the buildings and trees turned black from her sight. And that was her sign to get down from the tree before those night flying creatures begin to attack her pale skin.
The blonde girl sighed.
The sky now was dark orange and the buildings and trees turned black from her sight. And that was her sign to get down from the tree before those night flying creatures begin to attack her pale skin.
The blonde girl sighed.
“You
ruined my soothing date with my sunset.” She grumbled while climbing down from
the tree easily, fearlessly. She could’ve jumped anyway, like she usually does.
But didn’t want to risk stepping on the poor brunette down there. And it would
be embarrassing if that ever happened.
The
brunette himself watched her in amusement. Wondering since when she started to
climb up that tree and having her ‘soothing date’ with the sunset.
“’My
sunset?’ How cute.” The boy said, smirking when the girl hopped on the ground
successfully.
She
fixed her clothes before turned her head towards him, took her chance to look
at him closely. And she couldn’t stop herself from gaping a little (she
inwardly cursed herself from doing so) when she saw the undeniably attractive
face in front of her.
He
looks her age. But he has mature features. Like his hair, he has a pair of
beautiful brown eyes. Attractive eyebrows. Kinda big nose, but it looks cute
somehow. Thin lips, a bit chapped but still look soft. Gaunt cheeks and sharp
jaws that could cut glass just by looking at it. In short, he’s handsome. Even
with the dirts on his face and those ugly clothes.
“I’m pretty sure he has such an annoying face when I saw him from up
there”, she thought.
When
she saw the brunette boy grinning widely (which is look so cute), she snapped
back from her thought and looked away, embarassed from being caught up staring at
him. Damn it.
“My
sunset. Not yours”, She claimed childishly, taking her bag from the ground with
her and started walk away fast from him. He heard the boy chuckled, following
by the sound of footsteps behind her.
“Okay~ your sunset. But hey,
come on. Are you gonna leave just like that? We should talk, you know? I’ve
waited for you and your sunset soothing date to end, remember?” He said
teasingly, she could sense that he was still grinning widely.
“I
didn’t ask you to wait. You decided yourself. And we have nothing to talk about.
I’ve said that’m done talking with people today.” The blonde girl scowled when
the latter easily matched his step with the girl.
“So I
can talk to you tomorrow?” The brunette asked cheerfully, eyes shone lightly
like a little kid getting his favorite candy from candy machine. It almost look
adorable. And she hated herself for thinking that way.
"No." She replied harshly. Stepped up her pace to avoid the brunette boy, but it was hard since the boy has such long legs to get easily match her pace.
"Aww.. don't be like that. It's nice having a friend to talk with, you know. Come on, I'll treat you coffee. We can find a good place for coffee around here. How's that sound?" The boy insisted.
"No." She replied harshly. Stepped up her pace to avoid the brunette boy, but it was hard since the boy has such long legs to get easily match her pace.
"Aww.. don't be like that. It's nice having a friend to talk with, you know. Come on, I'll treat you coffee. We can find a good place for coffee around here. How's that sound?" The boy insisted.
She
huffed before stopped walking and faced
the still grinning handsome
brunette guy.
‘Stop that...’ She shook her head slightly.
“Seriously
what do you want? Why are you so eager to talk to me? What do you want me to
tell you? Wanna know my worries? I have none! And even if I have one, I’m not
going to just tell it to any stranger like you. You’re curious about me? You
have nothing to be curious about. I’m nothing special. You want a friend to
talk with? Find another person. A same cheerful annoying person like you. I’m
dating a sunset. I’m boring. I have no wonderful stories to share with you. You
got it?!”
She
didn’t know what has gotten into her. She just suddenly got so worked up over
this brunette boy and the next thing she did was shouting at him. Let out all
of her annoyance towards him. And now she was panting, hands slightly shaking,
cheeks flushed, chest rose up and down. What had just happened?
The
tall boy smiled at her, and it was warm. She frowned at that, didn’t get the
reason of him smiling like that.
“What?”
“Shout.
Shout again. It does make you feel better, right?” The latter replied, still
smiling.
The
blonde girl stunned. This is what he wanted her to do? Shout? Shout, spit it
all out to make her feel better? She
did feel better. She felt relieved, somehow. It was like the burden on
her shoulders finally loosen up a bit. It felt good. The shouting, she
meant. But never in her life she would want to admit it to the boy in
front of her.
After a
few moments of staring at each other, she
let out a tired sigh and shook her head, looking away from him.
“Stop
being such an smartass. I’m not doing it. Tired talking with you.” She said as
she turned around and walked away, going home. Or the
supposed-to-be-called-home place.
“Okay,
tomorrow it is!” She heard the brunette said from behind her. She ignored it.
“I’LL
BE HERE TOMORROW. AND YOU’LL BE HERE WHEN IM ARRIVED, OKAY?” The boy shouted at
her as she was getting further and slowly disappeared from his sight.
The
girl promised to herself to find another place, another tree, to date with her
sunset, where the handsome brunette boy wouldn’t find her. But deep inside her heart, she wasn’t sure
about wanting to find another place.
She
kept thinking about the brunette boy the entire night that day.
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You see what I'm doing here?
I'm writing chaptered fiction.
I dont know. This blog is too boring with all my angsty posts so I kinda decided to post my story here??
Stories that I wrote have became a waste because I never publish it, so now I wanna give it a try.
This plot is a bit rushed but since its my first try on publish online, I feel like I didn't have to make it perfect yet. So there you go.
Sooner or later this fic will be a chaptered fanfic and probably I would have to post it on aff or ao3 or wattpad, aha. I'm a bit too excited and confident right now. I'll make this a thing so let's hope I'm not gonna lose faith anymore :) It will be important to me :) Let's hope :)
So that's all. Chapter 1 is up. Please encourage me to finish next chapter. Yippi!
Meg-nim, I almost done writing my fiction too and after reading your fiction I don't have any courage to post mine T^T what a shame.
ReplyDeleteYour words are so up to the sky compared to mine :(
I can't reach the vocab huhu. Please be my mentor lmao
Anyway Fighting! Im waiting the next chapter :3
weniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii wth dont you prevent yourself from publish your fiction because of me because it'll make me feel guilty!! have some courage, i thought tousand times before post this too T-T so dont hold urself
Deleteand for gods sake tell me where you post all those fics of yours so i can read it too!! its not fair if you read mine but i dont read yours sigh
and thank you for putting your comment here. you encourage me to continue. thats important :" at least i know somebody actually read my fic :" i feel honoured. thank you! and thank you! #muchlove
I'll post it on my blog, and you said you know my blog so I don't have to tell you mihi~~
DeleteMeg-nim I miss you! My phone's broken T.T can't chit chat with ya :(
damn... i hope its the right one then
Deleteme too!!! i thought youre on the other side of the world again. ya know, that 'working my arms and legs' world (is this even make sense) so i try not to bother to contact u haha u brat check your freaking twitter T v T
meg-nim u know I'm so lazy to open my twitter T^T
Delete.... okay then I will check my twitter, cuz i miss ya huhu
I'm working but not that busy, I'm just... lazy lol
and i need ur help to check something hehe I'll contact you soon when I get my phone :3